Not bad..! ^^ i liked the review..! and yea i watch the first season, though
Takemoto still hasn't really found himself..! Though i really liked the comedy
part where Morita always sorts of bullys Agumi, that was the cutest times..!
Well and i also have to say that it is a must watch this show is so exciting and
you never know what can be expected, i looking forward to watching season 2,
though i really hope that Rika and Mayama, will finally be together, but i feel
sad for Ayumi, she tries her best to be do anything for Mayama and she gets
nothing in return, i think she would lead a better life with Nomiya, for now and
the love triangle of Takemoto, Morita and Agumi, will like sort of be sorted
out, looking forward to it so i hope this time there is a better ending..! ^^
Dun you think so too..! ^^ loved the review..!
Quote by shoujoboyWell I have a few
things that I think need to be brought up. First, the review template says
"Briefly describe the plot". You wrote up an entire mindnumbing essay
on the story, which I can be not many people took the time to read. Secondly a
thesaurus should've been used. Did you notice that your first sentence in each
category described it as 'great'. The art was great. The characters voice was
great. Using varying words gives the review much more impact so much more than
overuse of one. Also, for something that you gave as a 9.5, it didn't have the
impact nor feeling behind it that would warrant such a high score.
Keep working on it and remember, most of us are here to help improve your
writing skills, it's just constructive. If someone blatantly attacks you, don't
bother with them.
haha thanks..! ^^ i will improve my writing skills haha..! ^^ thanks alot for
commenting..! ^^
ja-ne..! ^^
i loved ouran high school host club...! how i wish i can be in a school like
that...! i wanna haruhi to be with tamaki...! they look good together...! nice
review very detailed i wonder when episode 10 will come out...! anyway see ya
around...! ja-ne....!^^
i found the first wpisode weird didn't inderstand till the las part...! haha...!
^^ but itsa nice show i can agree on that one...! hope everyone likes it too...!
^^ see ya...!ja-ne..!
hahax..! nice one, though a little short hahax..! spelling hahax..! must improve-ne..! gambateh, check with the auto dictionary next time..! ^^
Not bad..! ^^ i liked the review..! and yea i watch the first season, though Takemoto still hasn't really found himself..! Though i really liked the comedy part where Morita always sorts of bullys Agumi, that was the cutest times..! Well and i also have to say that it is a must watch this show is so exciting and you never know what can be expected, i looking forward to watching season 2, though i really hope that Rika and Mayama, will finally be together, but i feel sad for Ayumi, she tries her best to be do anything for Mayama and she gets nothing in return, i think she would lead a better life with Nomiya, for now and the love triangle of Takemoto, Morita and Agumi, will like sort of be sorted out, looking forward to it so i hope this time there is a better ending..! ^^ Dun you think so too..! ^^ loved the review..!
*sakura-chan*
haha thanks..! ^^ i will improve my writing skills haha..! ^^ thanks alot for commenting..! ^^
ja-ne..! ^^
*sakura-chan*
i loved ouran high school host club...! how i wish i can be in a school like that...! i wanna haruhi to be with tamaki...! they look good together...! nice review very detailed i wonder when episode 10 will come out...! anyway see ya around...! ja-ne....!^^
*sakura-chan*
oh loved the review thank you so much for sharing...!^^ see ya around ja-ne...!^^
*sakura-chan*
i wonder why in the end she had to die so sad....!anyway nice review good job...! loved it...! ^^ see ya around ja-ne...! ^^
*sakura-chan*
i like both the manga and the anime...! good review veru detailed...! loved it...! ^^
see ya around...! ja-ne...! ^^
*sakura-chan*
i found the first wpisode weird didn't inderstand till the las part...! haha...! ^^ but itsa nice show i can agree on that one...! hope everyone likes it too...! ^^ see ya...!ja-ne..!
*sakura-chan*